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Post by bennyjr123 on May 26, 2008 0:07:09 GMT -5
Please, if you've read through one or more of my rp stories let me know what you think. If you have something you liked, disliked, think I should change, or just want to say something about it, post it here. All constructive criticism is appreicated, (including telling me how many typos I have. I don't do spell check and I know I should.lol)
-Benny
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Post by flygon99 on May 26, 2008 0:29:13 GMT -5
Well I have read every last one of your RP's and I think they are pretty dang good. I like pretty much everything though. Kevin is a good main character: He knows what's right and seems to have skill, but at the same time isn't a god or something. Cara has to be the one to cause fighting and is always "smart" but you love her at the same time and everyone needs one of those. Joey is a funny character that always gets himself into trouble usually out of innocent stupidity at a young age. The story itself, has made me excited, happy, and even laugh at times so it definetly keeps you hooked. Your typos while very common are not hurting the plot so it still all makes sense. I loved your Hoothoot storyline with the illusions especially. It was very creative and well thought out. Squirtle was just a cute idea being a baby and I like the way you two grew together. Instead of just your average pokemon you get from Prof. Elm you raised it from birth. Every little story is entertaining and unique in it's own way and how could that not be awsome. So the only question is what will happen next oh mighty one who sucks honey from his paw? 10/10 keep them coming, awsome job
Flygon99
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Post by bennyjr123 on Apr 9, 2009 23:54:43 GMT -5
*Update*
The story's been updated. "The All-knowing Teddy Prodigy" has been finished, and a new chapter is on it's way in the Violet city area.
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