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Post by flygon99 on May 26, 2008 0:15:31 GMT -5
Go for it, read it all and tell me what you think. Try to make any criticizim constructive and not pointless. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy it.
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Post by bennyjr123 on May 26, 2008 0:23:07 GMT -5
Alright, well there's really not much to say about this rp...besides how awesome it is!
I really love the twist you have on it. Pretty much everyone else here decided to take the typical, gym battle/journey rp (including myself) and you went a completely different direction. You made a really unique character, and added another one to spice it up as well. You're really good at adding suspense to each post, and your also good at explaining things without giving the whole story away. You're also very descriptive, especially when it comes to battles, keep it up.
I really hope you keep going with this because there are alot of things I want to find out. What happened to Natalie? What's the connection to this Cyrus guy and the other two team galazy excecutives? What are Natalie and Rick hiding about their grandfather? And what's been going on in the 3 year gap in Renji's life that we missed? I hope to see all these questions answered in the future.
10/10-An awesome rp dude!
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