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Post by warriorgaz19 on Jul 8, 2008 15:57:48 GMT -5
similar to everyone else , just tell me anythign you can haha! also this can be the place for people to discuss my story with other people if they want to.i purposly put twists and changes in time in my story to confuse you all and get you thinking, so if you guys wanna exchange idea son things, feel free to do so here
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Post by flygon99 on Dec 3, 2008 23:03:18 GMT -5
I started reading up on your RP and I must say like mine it is stretched far away from the pokemon world. It creates suspense and you can show everyone your imagination and ideas through the story. Despite all this you also stay linked with the pokemon world keeping battles still in the story. Overall I enjoy it except I do have one complaint. The grammar is kind of bad with missed spaces and periods in odd places, which throws me off sometimes. Other then that great job..hopefully you can continue it soon!
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Post by warriorgaz19 on Dec 4, 2008 17:25:34 GMT -5
yup its bad in that sense i agree ahha.
alot of the time my thinking comes wen im half aslepp and my keyboards missing keys ahha. but thanks its nice to know someone enjoys it! and il fix all spelling and grammer at some point and continue it
-=warriorgaz19=-
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